Experiment Gone Wrong Barbara McHarris

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Experiment Gone Wrong  by  Barbara McHarris

Experiment Gone Wrong by Barbara McHarris
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This short story was full of detail and action. However, I felt that there was so much happening very quickly that it was easy to miss things. To me this was an outline of a story, rather than the full thing - it easily holds enough information plus twists and turns for a full length novel.It would certainly benefit by having separate chapters or even gaps between paragraphs where time has passed.

To cover a period of years from one sentence to the next with no explanation was a bit extreme.Having said that, I enjoyed the plot, sequence of events, and the surprise ending.



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